Thursday, 12 February 2015

PERSONAL WRITING

Sunday

One sunny morning I went to the harbor with my two 
friends, Stefanie, Sylvia and their Dad.
We went to watch sail racing, but it got so boring!
So, we went to the harbor playground.
We went on the flying fox, swing and slide and that was more fun than watching the sail racing.
 After awhile we went to the Farmers Market, but we didn't seem to like anything so we went to get McDonalds to have lunch.
I got a cheese burger and a fizzy drink.
After that we went back to their house and we each got a tip-top ice cream, then we made silly videos.
A few hours later, I had to go home.
And that was my Sunday!
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 February 2015 at 23:21

    Hi Dawn, I had so much fun! And i'm glad that you did too. What I really liked about your writing was you used some exclamation marks and that makes your writing look very exciting. :)

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  2. Anonymous23 February 2015 at 09:30

    Dawn it sounded like you had lots of fun with Stefanie and Sylvia,when i was reading your story i could picture myself being there! Great job! :)

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    1. Anonymous28 February 2015 at 21:55

      Hi Georgia.
      thank you for the complement.

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    2. Anonymous28 February 2015 at 21:56

      Hi Georgia.
      thank you for the complement.

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  3. Anonymous1 March 2015 at 10:04

    Hi Dawn
    Glad you had fun on Sunday
    I could pitcher you in my mind flying on the flying fox
    WELLDONE

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