Thursday, 30 April 2015

Anzac Poem

The crosses stand silent
As the Poppies  gracefully dance in the wind.The lives of of the soldiers  are gone
But the memories of them are kept in our minds.

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 15:16

    hi dawn! i like that you have said "but the memories of them are kept in our minds" it gave me a clear idea of what you mean

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  2. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 19:31

    brilliant personification dawn

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  3. Anonymous10 May 2015 at 19:34

    Hi Dawn, you had a good use of language and it was a good choice of a simile well done.

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  4. Anonymous20 May 2015 at 21:26

    Great use of personification Dawn.

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