Quick Write Term 1 Week 8
Imagine a whole day with magical powers. Just thinking that made me smile. It was time to sleep and the next morning I felt different. Then a spark of light on my hand appeared. I would be invisible for the whole day. I listed everything I wanted to do that day and the first thing I listed was pranking. I ran out to the door with an over flowing bucket of water, tied it up to the front door, struggling to reach. And then........
i liked how you said "i stuggeld to reach and...." it really gave me a clear picture in my mind of a door and a bucket. i liked how it was a cliff hanger and it left me at the edge of my seat
ReplyDeleteNice way to leave the readers wanting more Dawn. Remember to proof read your writing and have it checked before publishing.
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