My Language Features Goal Term One Week Seven

The sun was setting. The leaves were falling. Then all of a sudden.....

I was rolling down the hill, going round and round and round like a twisting tornado.But, really, I was only imagining it. I fell down a deep, dark hole. I saw nothing... But suddenly a flash of light blew my life up.My goal was to use more similes in my writing.I have used the simile "like a twisting tornado".