The box. The door. The crumbling brick. It begged me to be enter.
I stepped forward to the bright blue door. Staring silently, I was tempted to open the box. I picked up the monstrous red box and found a rusted old key. I held up the key and unlocked the blue door. Stepping inside reminded me of an old, abandoned castle. Inside was stairs. Thinking to myself ..."should I go into the rooms"..... I looked back and then went ahead. The sound of the house was completely silent. I put my right foot on the stairs then decided to keep on going. The first thing I saw was a room and all of a sudden I got pulled into the dark room.
Your quick write captured my attention Dawn. I like the uses of ellipses to help to create anticipation. Well done.
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